This feels very, inconspicuously, modern. Just up to date, fresh… I like it! Love the imagery you’ve got going on with fresh start vs. rough image, and the gradual, almost sad insight to the mind of the New Years Bachelor!

The multiple repetition of the word ‘clean’ was a bit grating, but other than that a very engaging piece! MH :)

Thank you for the useful comment MH! I hate repeated words too so it’s odd that I didn’t catch the multiple ’clean’s either… could have something to do with the fact that I was a bit hungover when I wrote this. :)