hahahaha! that poor guy! we love a tortured character, don’t we?

Okay, this was an epic continuation. Some great humor here. I’m getting the sense that this guy is involved in something that he did not expect to be involved in, like in Hugh Laurie’s The Gun Seller. Perfectly executed!

@ElshaHawk Yeah, the idea of the guy having a really bad day was more interesting to me than where the keys went. I really have no ideas there. Just like to torture poor Joe.

@kaellinn18 Thanks. I’d be interested to see where he goes from here. I get the feeling it won’t be enjoyable for him, either way.

Uh oh, Joe.

Well written sequel, thanks for that! I like that you played with the details and kept the action going. I pictured him in the post-cast/weak part of rehab so the casts were a new detail I didn’t expect. Nice, overall.

“That looks like paint.” FTW

Hey, Wanda. I didn’t even think about him not having casts on. I’ve never broken anything so I guess that didn’t occur to me. Plus the casts torture poor Joe a little more.

Thanks for a great beginning.

oh poor Joe! Good humour. I also like your speech and your use of italics.

You’ve done a very good continuation.

Can’t think of anything I don’t liked about this. There isn’t quite as much detail in this part as the last, but I guess the character limit restrained you.
Good job,
Abby x

Now this is good. You’ve maintained the cavalier attitude from the previous entry and kept up the humour nicely.

I have to say, I really didn’t see Joe in casts either, not if he’s in rehab and working on rebuilding his strength. But I loved the line ‘next time they ask’. Because he’s expecting there to be a next time and criminals are very accomodating about which body parts they break :)

I really enjoyed this.