ooo u have me interested..i can’t wait to read more

Nice set up for a story. I like when authors drop the reader into the middle of a story and guide them from there rather than providing the entire back story up front.

My only suggestion would be to find another word for “just.” In the first three sentences alone, you use the word four times.

Oh I never noticed that, I’ll try to come up with something.
Thank you =)

he has a soft spot for amanda.. but are they supposed to be together? hm..