Sequel . . . Prequel . . . something, please!
I NEED to know what’s going on.

Sounds like someone is suffering from bipolar disorder. That disease is hard on everyone involved.

This story was alright, but, for me, it needed something that would pull me in, something different to make me care. Right now, it reads like hundreds of similar conversations on daytime and primetime TV.

yeah, and considering this conversation popped into my head between my computer and the fridge, I probably had more substance in my mouth than in the story!

I edited the conversation, but didn’t add too much more. I made this about a breakup.