oo this is so cute and sad and i just can’t wait to read more =]

awwww, I agree; so cute yet so sad.

have you been reading the likes of lurlene mcdaniel?
the rose is a nice touch.

i like the rose its a nice way of showing you care. its also and nice ending to this part of the story. keep up the good work BB

This is a beautiful piece. Elsha is right; I’ve read a lot of Lurlene McDaniel, and this could easily fit in one of her books.