well crap, he is in a bad situation. reminds me of 9/11, the building wreckage and dust.
very descriptive, sticking to the theme, dialogue thrown in to move the piece along, touch, sight, smell and taste kind of go together with the dust, sounds of voices and coughs, hey, this is still top notch writing. :)

Thanks. I have several ideas as to what made 2010 such a bad year, but I thought I’d see if anyone else had ideas first.

By the way, what is the (LoA) I see so much around here?

GASP
Yeah I’d have to agree; not such a great situation to be caught in.
2010- sigh I hope its a good one.