A nice take on the challenge, with moments of brilliance. Don’t know about the word ‘plodding’ in the first paragraph, doesn’t quite seem to fit? Other than that, interesting and well written… Would be nice to see some one-shots from you though – finality in 1024 characters is a useful skill! Well done though… MH :)
A nice take on the challenge, with moments of brilliance. Don’t know about the word ‘plodding’ in the first paragraph, doesn’t quite seem to fit?
Other than that, interesting and well written… Would be nice to see some one-shots from you though – finality in 1024 characters is a useful skill!
Well done though… MH :)
ew! and one mystery solved, he was evading men, now to go clean off at a public park and figure out who he should be running from.. oh and get a bite to eat.
Mostly Harmless 
ElshaHawk (LoA)