Comments on A Masterclass in the Deduction of an Unknown Visitor's Identity by Mostly Harmless

ElshaHawk (LoA)

ah, someone to tell him that his brother is dead I suppose.. nah! this story needs yet another twist!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Cody Walton

Excellent! I hope someone else comes and continues it. I love seeing the directions new authors take the story.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Abby (LoA)

I must say that that is a title to be terrified of =D
I love the third line – so unmodest….
The last line is very classic too and I love it.

This series is beginning a theme of Abby-can-find-no-problem and here it is repeated.
Nice job and good use of a snow day.
Abby
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- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
thelostgirl

I found this a little hard to follow. How can Rafferty see his recptionist from his office? Was the door open or is there a window into the corridor? Aside from that I like it, especially the application of that bloody useless theorem. Rafferty has a scarily sharp mind.

Right, I’m off to read the next sequel.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
JLaughter001

Psh, Pythagorean is God. I enjoyed…4 pencils for you!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Blossom Ruoquen (LoA)

Quite lovely, as usual mister harmless :P
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5