Oh this is GOOD… The characterisation is stronger in this piece, and of course we see the contrast to the first piece – Loss Vs. Opportunity is certainly an interesting thematic interpretation of Pessimism Vs. Optimism. Thanks for entering! MH :)

I’m with Mostly Harmless on this one. It takes the bleak and realistic prequel and ups the ante. Normally I’m against self-sequels, but because this is more “inspired by” than “immediately following,” I’m totally in favor of this. Well done!

that was awesome! ironic, and awesome!