haha, superbaby! mutants! those poor parents..
Ha! I like the twist. The only thing I’m not sure I liked was the over use of sentence starters like “Which was only fitting seeing”, “For one”, and other transition phrases. It think it might be the multitude of commas in those phrases. =/
Very nice play off of the prompt! I do agree with Stovo, but otherwise an enjoyable entry.
Okay, with some much needed criticism, and a little edit magic I now offer you the new and improved version
Great way of running with the opening sentence!
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Stovohobo
Laine Grey
Jer Ray
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