Ori, you are the best!

Nice

It must be pretty far in the future for robots to have this many emotions and be this human like. Really interesting look here.

I agree with Stovo. Apparently, bars will never go out of style!

One comment: the line Even though it was raining seems really out of place. Maybe even an ellipsis at the end of the paragraph before could fix that!

Very nice

Thanks for the crit, Oreos! I’ve edited accordingly.

This is good.

Very noir, right up my alley.

i really like the first person narrative.

The same robot noir thing as Logical Expressions, along with all that means, but I like the flow better here. There isn’t anything specific I can think of to improve. It could maybe stand to be more evocative, but I suspect that would ruin the bleak, stark, robotic feel and we can’t have that.

I have to say, it sounds novel in concept but I like your robot stories, man.

dang i like this he is like the metal humphrey bogart

This is a very interesting world, clearly.