Oh and a couple things. I think you forget “the” in the sentence talking about being the hero. it reads, “he is not hero” and I think “the” is suppose to go there?
and was the “I survived” bit a quote? If it was then you need…well i forget what they’re called but they’re quotation marks minus one quotation…it’s what you get when you don’t press shift but you press the quotations key on a keyboard lol.
and what’s strange about having civil conversations with brothers?
Nice bit of book analysis, developing the relationship between Kat and her brother, nice plot device.
And that question is heartbreakingly simple -Robin loves you… John should go away. She only likes him because he shares his name with one of her favourite authors! MH :)
Uh, I think you missed a word in this phrase : "coward if he fled to Canada, not went a fought!” Was it supposed to be “to fight”? I’m not sure maybe I’m just wrong… What’s with her and her brother though? Before didn’t she lock him out of the house or something?
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