I love the way you tell this story! very good job.

Clearly you write from experience, or at the very least from the heart, and that comes across well in the story. I think you mean ‘than’ rather than ‘then’ in the first paragraph, and I find the phrase ‘wash through me’ in the third paragraph a little off… Perhaps ‘wash over me’ or ‘surge through me’? Just reads better to me…

But generally very good, you capture the movement of ballet with precision and flair. Well done! MH:)

I know this feeling :)
I love how you talked about the memories of dancing. I don’t think one could ever stop becoming a dancer.
The last line is very powerful.

I KNOW this was from experience AND the heart. :)

This is so beautifully written! i love the singular details, and how each detail brings back another memory until the finale.

I don’t really like ballet, but I loved this story! Very well written!