I like her bitchy attitude.

Telling it from the bitch’s perspective… An interesting take on a massively overdone genre!

A couple of technical things, you mean ‘immediately complimented’ just over half way down, and near the end you need speech marks at the end of Amy’s dialogue. Breaking it into clearer paragraphs wouldn’t go amiss either…

But generally, it captured my attention more than many other piece’s with a similar situation, mainly because of the POV.

She’s either going to get bitchier, or see the error of her ways. If bitchy means we get more lines like that killer last one, then bitchy it is… Reading on! MH :)