Good to see some more book info here, but I have to say the quick switch from holocaust discussion to romantic problems isn’t exactly a natural one – the tones are very different, obviously, and it might be better if you focus on one or the other.

Still the dialogue is good, and that last line is evidently a nod to things to come… 358 days left! MH :)

I think I recall you reading this book….I think…hm…

Night is not a good book—I’m sorry, it’s not.

Lemme not get into how it’s not, and more focused on this. Uh… “It just seems as thou-,” You don’t need a comma there, you’re getting interrupted so you just need two dashes, and there should be three dots when you’re doing the whole pause thing.

Other than that, I’m glad to see Robin suffer a little. Doesn’t like it when he’s not the center of Kat’s attention, huh?

“must have went” grated but I don’t know how Americans speak too well.