I wouldn’t know that this is incest if it weren’t for the challenge.

But setting that aside, this is beautifully dark and erotic. I wanna give it 4.7 pencils, but I can’t. Sorry.

Hmmm. Erotic.

Sophia is right, there’s no hint that it’s incest except for the challenge. I like your use of italics except for the word constricting. For some reason, I didn’t feel that word needed it because it’s such a strong word. But a good entry!

it was the blood at the end that got me. I clearly saw the brother and sister here. You must’ve edited. :)

Actually no, the only editing I did was with the word ‘constricting’. I read over the comments and agreed with Horrorfan13. Thanks for seeing the connection between the blood and the brother/ sister relationship though—that’s what I was going for!