This is a very dramatic piece, operatic in a way. There is so much great description in this. I really love it.

Her reaction to villians and cursing herself instead of the rock are nice little touches.

I’ll hold off rating until the end of the challenge but I really like this.

I really like it too…makes me wonder what it was she did.

Well written. Our inner voice tells us things we don’t want to hear. You can’t fool it. You can’t shut it up. You can’t divorce it. It is your worst critic when you make mistakes and your best friend when you make things right. Who do you want to spend the rest of your life with?