Makes me want to scream. Really, it does. So well written, but I have to confess to being a little disturbed. Clearly that’s what you were intending though, so a massive well done on such a sensitive approach to a difficult subject.
Conflicting emotions indeed, excellently captured – the hesitance, compliance and ecstasy. I’m leaning more towards my brainwashing theory than the enjoyment one. In fact I feel bad for ever having written that now.
But nonetheless, stunning and heartbreaking. MH :)
The problem with anyone who reads incest is that they must first abandon all previous moral principles and make room for new ones in order to fully enjoy the story. I think this was wonderfully done and I don’t think it reflects any psychological damage to the girl. She loves her father. They have sex. She likes it. To her, that is okay, because that is how she loves him. You’ve done a nice job capturing that.
I tend to agree with Sophia. It’s my theory that the “conflicting emotions” people mention are theirs, rather than the protagonist’s. In my view, she isn’t conflicted at all: she’s happy to be so intimately adored, and she likes having a secret from her maternal overunits: a secret she wouldn’t trade for anything (yet).
Very well written, but I agree with the previous comments… so many conflicting emotions, it makes me want to scream. My feelings of repulsion clashing with the protagonist’s feelings of joy and love. Great writing, invoking so many emotions in the readers.
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