I enjoyed the story. You captured that “near miss” we have all had. I could feel that adrenaline rush that accompanies the experience.

Car chases are not easy things to write but you pulled this off with applomb. And there are a lot of unanswered questions in this piece which make me not only want more but also care about the unnamed narrator; I want to know who they are, whether or not they make it and why they’re being chased in the first place.

Well done on a very compelling story.