Brilliant! A worthy sequel, which more than lives up to the standard of the original – the dialogue is fantastic and you’ve pitched Mr Assassin’s characterisation perfectly…

I think you mean ‘even’ instead of ‘event’ in the fourth paragraph, and I’d think about the capitalisation in your title, it looks a little messy at the minute…

Nice hook for a sequel as well. Considering the strength of the central character, it would be a real shame if this didn’t go anywhere – I will certainly be keeping an eye out! MH :)

Great piece! I love what you’ve done with the character here. It’s rather different than I was imagining him, but it works extremely well. The back and forth dialog was well executed, and I like the little scar theory detail thrown in the middle.
Thanks for the sequel!

This was a great sequel to the original piece. I love how you developed the character. He’s definitely taken the form of an anti-hero. Your dialogue was awesome, and the hook for the sequel is perfect.