Can someone think of a better title? I have writers block with it!
How about ‘The Other Disciple’ for the title? Some lovely description, and the characterisation is good as well… I’m not sure about the ending, it feels a bit rushed – something a little more ambiguous might fit better. All round, a good read – MH :)
How about ‘The Other Disciple’ for the title?
Some lovely description, and the characterisation is good as well… I’m not sure about the ending, it feels a bit rushed – something a little more ambiguous might fit better.
All round, a good read – MH :)
I enjoyed the subtleness of her use of the magic. Great descriptions and I liked the character’s voice.
I enjoyed the subtleness of her use of the magic.
Great descriptions and I liked the character’s voice.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA)) 
Mostly Harmless 
Mr.Gabriel