I like how the fog and mist aren’t the essence of the story, they’re just there to set the tone and atmopshere – interesting…
Do you mean ‘I _couldn’t_ see the headstone for the mist’ in your penultimate paragraph?
Either way, an original way of looking at things – I appreciate it for not being horror or suspense, as the challenge will probably lead to in most entries. MH :)
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