Wasn’t sure where this should or could go, but the scene popped into my head about an hour after reading Mostly Harmless’ little story.

I like this as a continuation. It doesn’t stick with the tone of the original, it feels more realistic, which is an interesting contrast.

Technically, you need a full stop instead of a comma in the fourth paragraph, and you don’t need the speech marks at the end…

Now I’ll just be annoyed if we never see where this goes! MH :)

I think the historian has found the root of the fog.. :)
Always the essence of Ficly, to sequel with something different and take the story to a different place.

The root of the fog or the true fate of the Harris kids? There are a couple of places this could go.

The fourth paragraph confused me as well, until I realized you meant a period instead of a comma.

Oops. Thanks for catching the typos, Mostly.

Really enjoyed this read! Great setting and language. Now I’m off to read the prequels…