Comments on What You've Left Me With by someday_93

Abby (LoA)

wow…if this iswritten about you I can sympathise!
Very emotion packed. Seems to be written from personal experience. That’s how good it is!
Well done.
Abby x
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

This really builds up… Supported by a good structure, the emotion is allowed to escalate and escalate, ending with that chilling description of a horrible last resort.

Very impactful, and packed full of possible back story and character… Great work. MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
blusparrow (LoA)

Holy crap. I forgot how well u can write lol. Full of such emotion. Very good
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
blusparrow (LoA)

Holy crap. I forgot how well u can write lol. Full of such emotion. Very good
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

terrible beauty. :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Marli

Self mutilation is soooo sad. You are right though. You have no outlet but hey thats what Ficly is for. The more true the emotion the better the tale so let us have it all. Bring it on girl.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Gurth

Powerful content. Masterly control of rhythm.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5