@Elsha. See . I told you.

Well the phrase ’it’s a small world’ never really applied quite as much did it?

Interesting, but it just feels like we’re being told a series of events rather than a story, like you’ve strung together bullet points… I think the ideas here are good, but you could probably fill two or three fics with:

B) Wanting to find his real parents
C) Getting the results, and the impact

Just a thought? MH :)

Thanks harmless. I get an idea and then I write it. I then hope someone picks it up and runs with it putting all the nice editing etc. Slacko eh. Your help may start me editing.lol