OK, so the general idea here is quite good, I particularly like that the boss character is bending the rules to suit him – typical man in power eh?

Technically, there are a few edits you could make to improve general readability and success:

1) Unneccessary speech marks at the end of second sentence.
2) The third and fourth sentences feel a little rough. How about combining into:

Finishing up, I walked out wrapped only in a towel. Quickly, I realised it wasn’t my friend at all – instead, my ‘strictly-no-office-romances’ boss was standing, staring from by my bed.

Says exactly what you wrote, but flows better…

Then another unneccessary speech mark, and more than three full stops in your ellipses. But these are minor things mostly, which I only point out because they detract from a GOOD story with lots of potential – Ficly has a ton of authors who would be perfect to sequel this!

Good work for a first story – edit and the rating could go up. MH :)

Crystal…this was a very good story. At sometime or other most females have had to the deal male in the office routine this is why the story relates so well.

well done and welcome to ficly. I would do as Ed says…
apart from that I think it’s really good.
Maybe you could split it up a little into some small paragraphs…
Abby x