That is very beautiful…you should be really proud.

I love your use of italics…very effective and pretty.
I also like how the instrument is not the entire subject.
This could be sequelled too.
Well done
Abby x

This is a very deep piece. I like the little twist at the end which conveys so much. And I love that song!!

I couldn’t tell if their hands being likened to mosquitoes was a good thing or a bad thing.. The whole story was well-written and emotional in a very nostalgic way for me.

The structure of this piece is really strong – you build up the tesnsion effectively and then open up so many possibilities in that last sentence – your imagery and description is very strong too – thank you for entering! MH :)

Good job at tugging at the heart strings. Feels like it could mean a lot of different things, which I think is great for making it accessible to more readers. Nicely done, and I’m not even a piano player, though I am familiar with the tune.

That was absolutely stunning. Unlike everyone else, I don’t know that song…but I loved this piece.

What a great story! This one really kicked my ass. Well done!

Amazing. Heart wrenching. Well done.