I like how this piece really brings out the differences in Juno’s and Nyci’s personalities. Although I don’t think that Nyci should be quite so… lackadaisical?… I do like how they are now very distinct characters.

I think we should consider that poor Nyci has been locked away for a day and has been beaten up. It’s understandable that she should feel unmotivated. I made her so because I wanted to highlight the extreme difference between the two womens’ personalities…

Oho, why, I wonder, would dear Therys need rescuing? Glad you brought the action back to Juno and Nyci, I was wondering how they were getting along.

I think maybe they are a little too laid back… or something. Nyci certainly seems to be though I take your point Abby. Good job establishing character.