Comments on If Mel Brooks Was Mayor by kaellinn18

kaellinn18

Hey, they can’t all be five pencils, right?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Krulltar

No, not all stories can be 5 pencils, but some are. This made me giggle-snort while drinking my dr. pepper. I had the image of McDonald’s Mayor McCheese on his knees begging for some nookie, and Eva slapping him so hard his cheese wiggled.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Raegan Dauterive

Hilarious and clever =D
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Haha, this one was funny. I liked the flashbacks.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

More example of your wide ability to write anything… very funny, and wonderfully random – something a bit different! Nice work, MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

i know the ones from Blazing Saddles..
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Alotar

Wow, you managed to put two flashbacks in one ficly. Quite a feat, I’d say.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Browncoatben

Random + Mel Brooks = “It’s good to be the king!”

Enjoyable and fun.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5