Wow…the imagery in this was breathtaking. I wonder who she’s dragging…her child? Friend? Sister? Really good writing!

The imagrey was good, and I enjoyed the mystery in this one and am clicking the sequel…

Nice one. I think that you could replace some of the commas with fullstops – I was soaked but still it came could be a new sentence
Abby x

it’s her daughter.
I thought about what it would be like to lose a child but not want to let go, hoping someone, somewhere could help, but in your heart knowing that it is impossible…