Well now, you wouldn’t hate her if your subconscious didn’t have ‘I LOVEROBINREALLY!’ tatooed to your soul!
This is the kind of plot expansion I felt you needed – good plan. I felt there was a little too much ‘tell’ and not enough ‘show’ but the book element kind of rescues the story from what would otherwise be a collection of essentially sterotypical high-school characters…
Nah, if I was Kat and didn’t like Robin I would still hate Lacy, but merely for the fact of the last thing she said. That would’ve made me backhand her in the face.
Okay. PLEASE, enough with having a sentence every single line. They call it paragraphs.
Anyway, Lacy (which I think her mom said a mistake on the birth certificate, cause it I think it’s better spelled Lacey, but that’s just me.) seems to be getting what she wants.