I’ve noticed that you have this continuing from the pervious Ficly but in a way that you write a word then don’t finish the sentence until it’s not the next Ficly.

Personally, I think that’s not a good idea. Try ending it in a cliff-hanger instead of in the middle of a sentence, this isn’t a Soprano movie…

Thanks. I was trying to fit as much as I possibly could in to one Ficly, but i suppose it would sound better if I just used more parts.