Awe. This is a great inside view of someone foreign moving into the Americas. ONE OF US!

Oh, this is exactly the way I felt when I moved to England! Like Mr.G says it’s a really good representation of how it feels.

‘How can I be American with Islam wrapped around my face’ – that is one hell of a line… I’m glad you took a dramatic approach to a challenge that perhaps provides more obvious opportunity for humour, it works really well – interesting insight indeed. MH:)

Interesting that you chose to portray the mother as assimilationist and the daughter as more traditional. That wouldn’t have occurred to me.

Beautiful and powerful. Good stuff!

Your style always so unobtrusive in its effortless mastery, seems you could apply it to anything. Make anything interesting. I suppose you get into the situation.