Well you can’t argue with the eroticism, but whether it’s eroticism for eroticism’s sake is another question – I’m not sure.

On the one hand, it’s well written, and the atmosphere and sexual tone is perfectly pitched, but I’m not sure that’s enough for me as a reader, personally. I’m going to keep an eye on this to see where it goes, which I suppose tells me I liked it, so there we go… MH :)

I’ve read all three installments now and actually enjoyed them. I might question a couple word choices in the first installment’s shower scene that were a little too vulgar for the scene.

Seems that this is an intimate and highly-anticipated bout in the sack. Words like “slit” and “pussy” feel out of place.

However, the writing is well paced and…ahem…effective.

I haven’t read the prequels, but this seems really interesting. Is he an old man?

It’s fine, and leaves a bit of room for our own revisions. The cane seems to be a bit of a chameleon.
Naturally I like your blue-sea pic, it is very pure and chaste.