You capture the monotony well, and made me chuckle a little, which was pleasant… A good entry for sure, with a lovely little but of characterisation in the middle bit – MH :)
My goldfish never swims, he just hides in his shell. So I’m glad this one gets some exercise! However, I’m convinced mine recognizes me even though I’ve heard they only have a 3 second memory span.
This was really cute, really captured a goldfish’s life (and made me glad I’m not one).
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