nice, very sweet, makes me smile.
and that says alot because I’m a miserable git.
Andy G

The love of a mother.

Thought you shouldn’t captalize the the first letter of the words at the end, although I know you’re trying to emphasize the point.

Gabriel – your comment is kind of ironic…

Rebel – we are having words on Monday…

Nice poem…but you and your darn capital i’s huh? Capitalise them!!!!

Good spacing. Nice repetition…
A high 4!
(would be five if it was longer)