Comments on Day 16: Riding the Bus with my Sister by Rachel Simon by Catherine

Mr.Gabriel

D: John is a crack head?

THANK YOU, for forming paragraphs.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

No, John isn’t a crack head, he is (annoyingly), saving Kat from the crack head…

Not that this is anyway redeems him – he’s still a slimy, vain, arrogant fool… Again, you’ve worked the book in particularly well, and started to move the plot along with more pace, perhaps?

We’ll see, but as far as this installment goes, I was impressed… If you were interested, it is also the recipient of my most important comment to date – the one which gives me a perfect 10:1 comment to story ratio – so woo hoo!

Keep up the good work – MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Catherine

John isn’t a pot head….

YOU’RE WELCOME for forming paragraphs :)

Congratulations MH!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
The Silence [All By Myself] {LoA}

Ug. Pothead. >.> Why is the bus potrayed as so awful? o.o I’ve never had trouble on the bus. Then again I live 5 minutes from the school. xD
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Nymphaea Rose

Yeah where does Kat live anyway that this is such an awful bus? And is it 11:30 at night or something?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.