persistent, isn’t she? one thing i’d fix is: This was sensible for the first time in his life he was doing the sensible thing. Take out the first 3 words. and spelling, you need an ‘s’ on text in the third line.
As always, thank you for your recommendations. I made the changes you suggested. Thanks again Andy G
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Andy G {L.O.E.M.A.T.T.L.O.A.}