A Cheshire Owl?

Fun little take on the story.

“The fruit has kind of a knowledgy taste.”

“Well, does it have a forbidden taste, ‘cause that’s what it is!”

I love lampooning bible stories, putting modern dialog in the mouths of historical figures (especially making them swear scandalously).

I really hope to write more in this vein.

A nice little parody, although technically all fruit-picking is forbidden, regardless of time – so perhaps the owl is secretly in league with the serpent, but just doesn’t like being disturbed in the small hours!

Anyhoo, well executed, the fist-shaking was particularly amusing – all it needed was a ‘Darn you, meddling owl!’, and she would have been like a bad guy from Scooby Doo…!

Nice work – MH :)

I’ve seen several parodies of bible stories lately, but this is my favorite so far…this made me smile =]