Comments on Rivalry by Nathaniel Payne

Mostly Harmless

I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!

Really great descriptions and action storytelling here, I prefer magic when it’s written like this to when it’s ‘Harry Potter-esque’ say a word and something happens…

I may not be able to resist sequelling this one, so much flair and potential it offers readers and co-writers alike – great job! MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
kaellinn18

Wow, this was pretty epic. I love the idea of ancient wizards as school children, and your description of the battle is great!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Nathaniel Payne

Thanks, guys! I appreciate the positive comments. I actually intended this as a bit of a sequel to an old Ficlets story I wrote a while back: http://ficlets.ficly.com/stories/12387 It was a fun concept that I wanted to expand on.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.