I can feel the emotion dripping from this. It’s a compelling read. Tiny note about typos, though: in the last stanza, it’s “you’re” (contraction of “you are”), and no e in “perhaps”. Nicely done.
I can feel the emotion dripping from this. It’s a compelling read.
Tiny note about typos, though: in the last stanza, it’s “you’re” (contraction of “you are”), and no e in “perhaps”.
Nicely done.
ethelthefrog