I love the way you set the story up, that at the beginning it could mean anything. I know that I thought they were trying to catch a pedophile or something, so the end shocked me. I think you write best in first person as well, because you get really into their heads and all the emotion she feels is in every word.
You are on fire at the minute Leila because this is as gripping as it gets. Intensely emotional, an insightful look into how overzealous and dangerous interpretation of religion isn’t restricted to Islam.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
kaellinn18
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