Wait…so was he (she?) going to make the plane go down, but couldn’t? I really like this, but was a little confused – I’m also not sure I understand the line, “and then we would be on the circus would commence.”

I hate airports…and security…this really spoke to me because I know how frustrating it is, and you captured that really well.

Oops, i was editing that line to fit it all in and it didnt work

Okay, yeah, it makes much more sense now =]

It took two tries to correct it completely!

This is a superb piece – clearly any appropriate edits have been made as it reads excellently. It has a brilliant pace to it, moving seamlessly from social commentary on racial sterotyping to an unexpected and chilling finish…

A real rollercoaster here PJ, and a masterclass in the art of the subtle twist – the best thing I’ve read today – MH :)

Thanks, you’ve made my day :)