Nice turn around, that’s the ALRO I know, the smart and devil tongued man…

I think you need a ‘to’ in here..“It has taken me 10 years you finally realize..”

though the gun is extreme.. I think you’re going to take this character farther into villainy..

Well this was quite the domestic…!

For me, that last exclamation mark absolutely made this – I found some of the earlier dialogue a bit hard to follow, but it quickly hit it’s stride and kept running, excuse the extended metaphor.

I expect the sequel – ‘Further Descent into Villainy’ – soon… MH :)

I prequeled, so as to leave your villainy alone.

I read the prequel first and they’re both very well written. Snappy dialogue.

Ya, MH, the beginning is sorta supposed to have you going, “What the hell is going on here??”

Gonna go read the prequel..

i could make this a pretty dark series…