A bit creepy actually – you’ve captured an awkward, even foreboding moment in the middle of the party scene.

I love the name Audrey.

Has an almost Dorian Gray-like feel to it, with the hedonistic party animal wanting to live forever… Nice work – MH :)

This is the first story I have read that has been meaningful and incorporated wild drunks. Lately I have also been grappling with the concept of freedom – is stealing/breaking other people’s possessions going too far?

Also, it is interesting that only when in a state of drunken happiness he wants to live forever, questioning the realms of reality. Is his world real, or is the sober one real?

I really enjoyed this, and the broken lamp being stepped on the way out was a great touch.

I feel the lamp at the end uses great imagery to underline the central theme.

Er… I mean, party on, bro!

I want the sequel.