You’ve handled this well – I wasn’t sure how you’d do it, but you’ve maintained the personal thoughts and feelings in a wider context… I can only presume this is some kind of sick brothel, but I’m not sure.

Hopelessness is the word. And that is possibly one of the scariest things in the world – inevitability, no chance of escape or improvement. MH.

Love the plot uild up. Awaiting to see where this is headed…