Razor sharp dialogue, perfect book choice, some new subplots coming into play, I love it! A couple of typos, you mean ‘learn’ instead of ‘lean’ and ‘too’ not ‘to’ in the last line…

But creatively, this is pacy, racy and links in with Lacy – I rhyme! MH :)

Robin is finally off the Katherine train!

WOOT WOOT.

“Since when did you a Lacy talk?” m the only one who catched it. I think it should be and. I liked this piece xD Robin is a good character.

You should do a sci-fi book/fantasy. Ever read piers anthony’s: Xanth or John Scalzi’s Old Man’s War? Very good books. :D

The closest I’ve ever gotten to Sci-fi was Ray Bradbury and that was forced upon me. Then again I’ve never really given it a chance…

Or, of course, you could go with The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, as referenced in my glorious profile picture…

Douglas Adams, genius of a man! MH :)

Now Robin’s gonna use her. I betcha. I betcha he’ll use Lacy to make Kat realize her feelings for him.

difficult to follow if you have not been following the prequels^