It took me a while to get it, but when I did, the word ‘genius’ sprung to mind… It’s pals ‘maverick’ and ‘mallard’ turned up too, just for the heck of it…

Really very funny, and a tad creepy – bringing tasty, twistable snacks to life? You can’t argue with the originality! MH :)

This…..is……epic.

Reminds me of one I wrote back on Ficlets. I’ll find it and post as a sequel.

oh my.. this was perfectly executed! mind the pun.

(completely trips on Elsha’s pun)

Hey! Watch where you drop those!

Anyways, back on topic: RYD, you are a cruel, cruel being… You mess with my brothers, you mess with me.

Oops…I meant to rank 5 stars earlier…

Curse you, iPhone blundering fingers!!!

Hahaha, this is twisted and great!

Haha! Certainly didn’t see this one coming, quite excellent! Poor, poor Orange… I don’t think he expected this either.

Took me a bit to understand what was going on. Simple quotation marks might have been clearer than the italics use. Still, hilarious way to creep up on your fellow author’s name and make something funny and disturbing.

The idea of sentient Oreos is certainly a twist, and you executed it well. If there was anything that I might recommend, it would be to shorten the sentence “With a quick motion he rotated the disc, one clockwise, the other counter clockwise.” to “With a quick motion he rotated the discs in opposite directions.”