This is really intriguing, and reads like the prologue scene in a movie before the main titles – maybe not specifically related to everything that could later happen, but throws up some questions and introduces us to the world in which this is set…

Logan, as I’m sure you intended, is particularly enigmatic, to the point of infuriation almost, but still interesting. And I wonder how it does work, now we know how it doesn’t! MH :)

I’m guessing Logan is not human, or if he is, then he’s been altered in some way. With his lack of emotion, I thought at first that he might be a robot, but I’m not so sure. This piece raises a lot of intriguing questions that I would like to have answered. Nicely done!

Crap! Should have read this one first. I’m a little rusty. Please disavow 95% of my comment to your sequel.