When sequels live up to the ‘inspired by’ panel in the top right, rather than just following directly on, I think the Ficly Gods are pleased…

You’ve done this really well, the dialogue’s sharp and Todd is amusingly hateable! Good work, really funny – MH :)

The Todd paragraph was a bit confusing. ?
Singular scientist. Otherwise a wacky,
clever, interlude. Appreciated the gnawing of the apple ,seems his mice have taught him how to eat.

Thanks Marli. Fixed the typo.

If I followed correctly, another round-about play on a pen name. Cute and funny, especially the mouse breast implants and the simmering ill will towards Todd.